bahut accha comment diya hai .. acchi baat hai tumhare aur tumhaare zazbaat ke beech aur teesra koi nahi hai.. khayal agar jo khaali hon kalam ho apni chalaye rakhna (maut jhalak dikhlaaye tab bhi zindagi ka bharam banaye rakhna) last ke do line bas yun hi hain meri kavita se... tumhen to bahut aage jaana hai abhi mera asheerwaad hai..
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I think you have got the deepness for which you were looking for.. waise yaar, ye wali thodi samajh nahi aayi... kiski baat kar raha hai?
kuch khali khali sa hai... par kyun ye pata nahi..
haan aisa hi lag jata hai kabhi-kabhi bheed ke beech khada insaan tanha ho jata hai...
khoobsurat khayal...
aur sundar abhivyakti...
adaa ji.. ab aapne bheed mein tanhaai ki baat ki hi hai to aapse guzarish hai ki ek baar ye bhi dekhein..
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comments jarur dekhein..
Sundar aur arthpurn abhivyakti.Shubkamnayen.
bahut accha comment diya hai ..
acchi baat hai tumhare aur tumhaare zazbaat ke beech aur teesra koi nahi hai..
khayal agar jo khaali hon
kalam ho apni chalaye rakhna
(maut jhalak dikhlaaye tab bhi
zindagi ka bharam banaye rakhna)
last ke do line bas yun hi hain meri kavita se...
tumhen to bahut aage jaana hai abhi
mera asheerwaad hai..
bahut bahut shukriya aapka adaa ji
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