Monday, January 25, 2010

चोरी तो हुई है

चोरी तो हुई है...
कमरा कुछ खाली खाली सा है.
झांक कर देखा तो सब कुछ,
लग रहा है पहले जैसा ही,
पर कुछ तो जरुर हुआ है गायब,
तभी तो खाली खाली सा है.
चोरी तो हुई है...

7 comments:

Ankush Agrawal said...

I think you have got the deepness for which you were looking for.. waise yaar, ye wali thodi samajh nahi aayi... kiski baat kar raha hai?

Ambarish said...

kuch khali khali sa hai... par kyun ye pata nahi..

स्वप्न मञ्जूषा said...

haan aisa hi lag jata hai kabhi-kabhi bheed ke beech khada insaan tanha ho jata hai...
khoobsurat khayal...
aur sundar abhivyakti...

Ambarish said...

adaa ji.. ab aapne bheed mein tanhaai ki baat ki hi hai to aapse guzarish hai ki ek baar ye bhi dekhein..

http://exploring-self.blogspot.com/2009/09/blog-post.html

comments jarur dekhein..

sandhyagupta said...

Sundar aur arthpurn abhivyakti.Shubkamnayen.

स्वप्न मञ्जूषा said...

bahut accha comment diya hai ..
acchi baat hai tumhare aur tumhaare zazbaat ke beech aur teesra koi nahi hai..
khayal agar jo khaali hon
kalam ho apni chalaye rakhna
(maut jhalak dikhlaaye tab bhi
zindagi ka bharam banaye rakhna)
last ke do line bas yun hi hain meri kavita se...
tumhen to bahut aage jaana hai abhi
mera asheerwaad hai..

Ambarish said...

bahut bahut shukriya aapka adaa ji